Sunday, July 9, 2023

Six Years Of Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.6

-Darkness
6 years struggling in the abyss of darkness.
Sleepless night laying down on the bed middle in the ocean.
Surrounding by walls, that might look like my own fortress.
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benny barnuevo
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Kevin Patrick 15 November 2024

Benny I hope you know that reading this I felt the weight of your sadness and I hope you have seen the light. I've knowing people trapped in those castles and who have knowing the wars I themselves. I hope you survived to write more works.

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Chinedu Dike 12 September 2024

Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings. Poignant and very heartfelt

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 10 February 2024

Life's journey is from the dark to the dark; the darkness is the ultimate fate of a life; this darkness is a mysterious light if someone can hold it by the heart of positiveness; great to read your poem

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Victor Eze 05 September 2023

A little glimpse of light is all we need in times of despair!

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Panagiota Romios 16 August 2023

Best to you on your journey Fo rewards.

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Bharati Nayak 17 July 2023

A profound poem that expresses powerfully your emotions of despair, your journey through abyss of darkness and at the end your hope for a good life.

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D.N. Rebb 11 July 2023

That is such a powerful poem. The darkness is real. I'm glad it had a hopeful ending. Loved it!

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