-Darkness
6 years struggling in the abyss of darkness.
Sleepless night laying down on the bed middle in the ocean.
Surrounding by walls, that might look like my own fortress.
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Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings. Poignant and very heartfelt
Life's journey is from the dark to the dark; the darkness is the ultimate fate of a life; this darkness is a mysterious light if someone can hold it by the heart of positiveness; great to read your poem
A little glimpse of light is all we need in times of despair!
A profound poem that expresses powerfully your emotions of despair, your journey through abyss of darkness and at the end your hope for a good life.
That is such a powerful poem. The darkness is real. I'm glad it had a hopeful ending. Loved it!
Benny I hope you know that reading this I felt the weight of your sadness and I hope you have seen the light. I've knowing people trapped in those castles and who have knowing the wars I themselves. I hope you survived to write more works.