I am a poem hunter,
The world's eighth wonder.
A man of word and letter,
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Though teachers are not kings,
yet they are the king makers.
Though teachers have not wings,
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Although the human mind has been divided into conscious, subconscious and unconscious today, yet the man had already been existing and his mind, too. Freud was of the view that he did not exactly invent the idea of unconscious mind because poets and philosophers were already familiar with it. He said that he had only presented its theory in psychological terms. According to Freud, the poetry comes into existence on account of regression and sublimation of unsatisfied longings. On regression of these conscious desires, the subcoscious and uncoscious minds apparently become symbols of sabotage but on sublimation they transform into creative subconscious and creative uncoscious respectively. It is either as the peaceful use of neuclear energy or as to irrigate the far flung barren lands from a large dam. When Plato said that even an expert of Poetic Technique could not create great poetry without intuitive insanity, he wanted to say that the poet could not depend on his conscious mind only because the source of superior creations is afterall the unconscious, the backyard of mind. Since then people have been considering the poets to be abnormal. You may call it insanity or licentiousness or poetic spell or revelation or intuition or poetic inspiration. On the other hand, a genius who is also seen at the last footstep of conscious, mostly depends upon his intuition. Therefore he is also considered to be abnormal. A litrary genius seldom turns to be normal but as a human being his best creative faculties operate during the most normal moments of his life. These are intellectual moments indeed. The analysis of revelation or intuition shows that it operates in two modes. In first mode, a totally untouched thought steps into conscious all of a sudden. It is usually considered similar to electric lightning. Therefore poets, mystics, even scientists, all are aware of it. While the second mode is more common which is also understood by people having non creative mind. This is called productive thinking and it is placed second to intuition. For example, a forgotten name or face or event comes into conscious suddenly during half-asleep. The first mode is related to unconscious while the second mode is related to subconscious. The subconscious is more important in both. In first mode, the unconscious is raised upto the level of subconscious. While in the second mode subconscious is itself a source of information. First mode is usually named as Poetic Inspiration while second as Poetic Imagination. A stream of thoughts begins to flow from subconscious towards conscious in both modes. Where in a trance-like state, the creator and his creation become two peas in a pod. At the end of the process when he observes his creation for the first time, it is no more a part of his subjective process but now he studies it objectively and makes modifications and additions in it. Thus he observes his creation as its first listener and critic, and tries to analyse what he has listened during intuition. In the first mode creative unconscious is responsible for the subjective process and creative conscious is resposible for the objective one. Likewise in the second mode creative subcoscious is responsible for the subjective process and creative conscious is responsible for the objective one. The creative conscious comes into existence by mastering the Poetic Technique. In fact, the functions of creative unconscious, creative subconscious, and creative conscious are so intercombined that they can not be isolated from one another. They are collectively known as Poetic Sense. In general terms Poetic Technique, Poetic Imagination and Poetic Inspiration are collectively called Poetic Sense.
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I am present in your blood,
You will never wash out me.
I am ocean you are flood,
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She is the spotless girl, Longingly waiting for him.
It is the life in whirl,
That is entangling him.
She is an innocent girl,
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The Poem Hunter Beach,
Exists under beech.
In every young's hand,
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Is it anger or is it disgust?
Is it of love or a pose of lust?
I astonish why you never turn?
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Manners and fortune are extremely close relatives, as every poor deserves hunger.
It is true extrinsically, intrinsically who knows? Because every ill-mannered has become stone-hearted in the near past.
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Ghadi ye alvida ki hai bichadna lazmi thehra.
Faza e dostan ko ab badalna lazmi thehra.
Hamain aese bichadna hai ke goya kal bhi milna hai.
Laga kar hazari chupke nikalna lazmi thehra
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She was a poet hunter, Hunting in Poem Hunter.
Pretending best and better,
Woman of word and letter.
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Conjoining back to back, staying on the moustache. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.
Those who'll hate, burn in the hell. And you should further tell. Raised from milk, raised from butter. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.
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We have to stop laughters and keep silence all of a sudden. We have to display a smile on our lips but weep at heart.
We were laughing at a joker named Inam in our wise heart, we have to wash the same(heart) with tears all of a sudden now.
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My creator has bestowed two eyes and two ears upon us. Then He has bestowed upon us one tongue by the divine wisdom.
In this way everyone knows that the tongue's work is one fifth. But since the time, this innocent (tongue) has become our possession.
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He can not sleep at all who never slept in life. As a dry eyed person can not weep at the time of death.
How can a poet remain silent on the departure of his predecessor. It is not possible in the poetic convention.
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M.A. English, M.A. Urdu, M.A. Education. Dip. TEFL, D.H.M.S, R.H.M.P. M.D. Ex house physician and Consultant Hahnemen Homoeopathic Medical College Faisal Abad. Ex Homoeopathic Doctor Khalid Bin Waleed Clinic Gulbahar Colony Kamalia. Ex Secondary School Teacher (Science) Govt. High School No.2 Kamalia. Ex Secondary School Teacher (Science) Govt. M. C. High School Kamalia. Ex Subject Specialist (English) Govt. College for Elementary Teachers (Male) Kamalia. Ex Senior Subject Specialist (English) Govt. Higher Secondary School 718 G.B. Kamalia. Toba Tek Singh. Founder Al- Shifa Homeo Clinic. (Sphygmologist. Cell +923216510357)
Love And Lust
Love and lust are poles apart.
Lust is chaos, love is art.
Love infinite, lust is finite.
Love is sustained, lust is short.
Love is spiritual, lust is physical.
Love is ideal, lust is sensual.
Love is selfless, lust is selfish
Love immortal, lust is mortal.
Love is productive, lust is destructive.
Love is optional, lust is impulsive.
Love is energetic, lust is crazy.
Love is humanist, lust instinctive.
Lust is rabid dog, love is padagog.
Love demands inner beauty, lust demands appearance.
Lust starts from black holes of eyes, love from conscientious part of heart.
Love develops in brain, lust develops in gonads.
Lust stays on surface of the words, but love in depths of unconscious.
Love is rationally emotional, lust is emotionally rational.
Love is Allopath, lust is Psychopath.
Love is Homoeopath, lust is Sociopath.
Love kisses, lust disses.
Love honours, lust ravishes.
Love insight, lust is blind.
Lust devours, Love nourishes.
Love replays, lust betrays.
Love impresses, lust oppresses.
Love centralizes, lust strays.
Love expresses, lust depresses.
Love is healthy, lust is lame.
Lust is gambling, love is game.
Love is Platonic, lust is Bubonic.
Lust is shameless, love is shame.
Lust is volcano, love is rain.
Love is Abel, lust is Cain.
Prophets weep, Demons laugh.
Love is fruitful, lust is vain.
Love is need, lust is greed.
Lust is maniac, love is sane.
Lust is a beast, love is dove.
Lust is hatred, love is love
Lust is passion, love compassion.
Lust is beneath, love above.
Love is even climb, it is never lost.
Lust is a decline, it is ever lost.
Love is always true to the core but lust is hyperbole.
Love provides endless satisfaction, lust ends at opposite pole.
Love is the base of this universe,
Lust is baseless in itself.
My subject is my subject.
Such enveloping my subject.
Such as God to His universe.
Such as Devil to this universe.
Love is a sincerity and responsibility.
Lust is insincerity, irresponsibility.
Confirmation test is just,
sacrifice or obedience.
Both or only one is must.
Lust is aimless without love.
Love is aimful without lust.
My subject is thy subject.
My subject is love and lust.
I can tell you one secret.
Love and lust are poles apart.
But make union only when.
Lust is second, love is first.
Just, ask a victim of lust.
If only the people who need to understand this could do so. Perhaps enough people will be able to understand and convey your message that it will matter. Well written!
Yes Jazib, you have expressed truth clearly and artfully. Well done!
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Money is precious but not more than time. (Jazib Kamalvi)
There is no need of your poem if there exists a better one than yours for the same situation.
A world class poet of Urdu and English, I think. Very appealing approach, in fact. An excellent translator, indeed.